For my third edit to the Job Interview, Wikipedia Article, I corrected the following grammar error(it's in bold):" Candidates generally dress slightly better than they will be expected to wear to work, with a suit being appropriate for a white-collar job interview, but jeans being appropriate for an interview as a plumber. I did this by changing the sentence so that it would read the following way (changes in bold): "Candidates generally dress slightly better than they would for work, with a suit being appropriate for a white-collar job interview, but jeans being appropriate for an interview as a plumber."
I also added a citation to a sentence I had added during a past edit. In order to add the citation I needed to add a reference section, so I did that as well.
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I really like your Wiki article! I agree that the grammar change was very appropriate and made the sentence sound much better. I also like that you cited your work. I know I have learned that without citation, your edits are likely to be deleted by another user, so it is definitely beneficial to take the time to find your source! Good Work!!
I think your idea of editing this article is very good. I think it is definitely beneficial to all students to read that Wiki Article. Also I see that you have really put some time and effort into your edits, good Job!
Thanks so much for the comments! I really enjoyed reading them.
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